i'm bleeding on the inside fluid filling my lungs drowning me from within all you see is a single tear drop from my eye sliding down my cheek. i don't feel anymore emotions are off white more like the cigarette stained walls all of it feels the same it hurts and kills the same. tear my heart out put it back in leave it bleeding slowly filling my lungs and killing me. |
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I don't know, this is a combination of several little pieces I have done when things came to mind. Its just here.
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emotions are off white
more like the cigarette stained walls
all of it feels the same
it hurts and kills the same.
That stanza gave me some excellent images in my mind. I enjoy it when that happens.
This entire thing is very well written. The last part has some interesting information. Great work!
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'Wanting to be someone else is a waste of the person you are.'
CoHM
Critics of Hoarse Mentality
emotions are off white
more like the cigarette stained walls
all of it feels the same
it hurts and kills the same.
That stanza gave me some excellent images in my mind. I enjoy it when that happens.
This entire thing is very well written. The last part has some interesting information. Great work!
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'Wanting to be someone else is a waste of the person you are.'
CoHM
Critics of Hoarse Mentality
put it back in
leave it bleeding
slowly filling my lungs
and killing me."
- Excellent description of that, right there. Perfect imagery results in a perfect ending.
Awesome, man.
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no.
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Shattered glass lyes on the floor. Making my hands
bleed. Stars of glass. Moon of glass. Heart of glass. All making my hands bleed.
well done though
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